Metronidazole bloating

Nothing ruins erotic fiction like the imagery of body bloating bladder leaking pregnancies

Loved how the warriors' heads began to spin as they were faced with processing lightening fast mood changes! Can you arrange a couple of menstruation cycles too? Replete with visicious cramps, bloating and crushing insecurity! Hot damn I'd pay to read about that!
Can't wait for labor! Oh yeah bring it!

I love having my period. I take two full enemas for cramping and bloating. I wear a tampon and overnight pad for five days. I buy all my own feminine hygiene products. I use a feminine deodorant down there every day. I keep my pussy area in a Brazilian wax. I carry my tampons and pads in a pink purse. All this helps me feel more feminine .

The story tags are filled with terms of pure fetish delight and mysteriously left out cuckoldry. Even so this piece of crap ends up bloating the file for Loving Wives! This sordid tale about afamily of deviant lovers should have been posted in Fetish or BDSM. WHERE ARE THE PEOPLE WHO MODERATE THIS WEBPAGE? Can't they reject a story from a category and require it be placed in one more appropriate?

There seems to be a standard formula for multipage stories on Literotica. Several pages of slow buildup and then less than a page or maybe a page to a page and a half (rarely) of the climax. Sometimes that can be effective and possibly even the perfect way to tell a story. What's wrong with the 3rd act?
Rather than ending, how about an inevitable showdown with the cheating slut Jen getting ambushed when she arrives to Justin's house and she sees how smoking hot Sammi is and realizes
Justin knows she's a dirty pig slut. Maybe come Monday the rest of the world is introduced to the hottie Sammi & Justin. Then some developments on how their relationship is progressing. Those are just a couple of ideas...I'm not a writer. I just know that there are many interesting ways to advance the story without bloating it and more importantly having an interesting story with a more traditional story arc.

please explain to me why 4 pints (a half gallon) would cause a young lady's belly to so distend that she appears six months pregnant
His semen is in a state of compression in his body.
The chemical mixture of his semen reacts when it enters a female and causes bloating.
He likes seeing girls look pregnant, so his psychic abilities trigger temporary belly expansion.
He's a psychic alien with inhuman biology. Pick whatever explanation you like if you're finding it distressing.
Gee, thanks for that explanation, Tefler
You're welcome, I'm glad it was helpful. That's the terminology they use in my story, so your example to describe passive scans is incorrect in my literary universe. They work exactly as I described, and are named accordingly.
help us to understand how these passive scans work
Out of literally thousands of emails I've received regarding the story, you're the only person who has a problem with how the passive scans work. So let's not pretend you're the spokesman for some vast throng of people who are dying to know the answer to this critical element to the story...
You've compared yourself with the greats
By saying I copied their approach to realistic physics? That's not really a comparison, I'm just citing my sources of inspiration.
There are a few times I think you should have admitted to a mistake
I've admitted to plenty. Getting character names mixed up, calling Paragon armour Phalanx armour by accident, characters getting out on the wrong deck, there's been quite a few over the last year.
like with the penis-passing-the-cervix
That isn't one of them. Throat expansion for deep-throating, and belly-expansion to carry his loads happens in chapter 1. Girls stretching to take him into their womb was intentional from the start, and very much in-keeping with the rest of the story.